[projectaon] Re: Wolf's Bane Outstanding Issues
- From: "Jonathan Blake" <jonathan.blake@xxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
- To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
- Date: Sat, 17 Jan 2009 09:36:51 -0800
On Sat, Jan 17, 2009 at 4:03 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:
>>>>> (er) 57: power word -> word of power
>>>>> [jb: correct as-is]
>>
>> I understand the desire to make it clear that this isn't _the_ Power
>> Word, but I think the best course here is to leave it alone.
>
> To clarify: This should be Rejected, rather than <spell>Power Word</spell>,
> then? Sorry, I'm not feeling too bright! >_<
Yes, rejected.
>>>>> (er) 234: Hold Enemy and -> Hold Enemy, and (for consistency;
>>>>> this is how the commas are generally used in lw) [LM]
>>
>> I've changed my mind about this one (call me moody). It always struck
>> me as fussy to add those commas even though I thought it was the
>> correct thing to do. However, grammar is not an exact science and this
>> reads fine as-is, especially when I saw the spell name italicized.
>> That should be separation enough for a reader I think.
>
> So this should be Rejected and does not need a comma at all, not even after
> <spell>Hold Enemy</spell>?
Yes, the comma after Hold Enemy should be added. Sorry.
--
Jon
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