Jonathan Blake wrote:
(er) 346: a moment longer, and so you mount -> a moment longer. You mount [SD: Original text just does not flow well at all] I vote to change "and, with a flick of your heel, you leave" to "and--with a flick of your heel--leave". Note the dashes and the removal of "you".
(Also in Section 208--fixed there as well.)
Next, to respond to the feedback.
And the footnotes and other non-errata. Some of those affect all 8 NO books. For example, how do we start the Levels of New Order Kai Grand Mastership at #4 instead of the usual #1?
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