Jonathan Blake wrote:
(er) Equipment: and used in addition to two normal weapons. -> awesome, but how are you holding the third weapon? your teeth? also: weapons -> Weapons [LM] Is this misleading enough to make a footnote worthwhile?We could clarify this as per the Mongoose editions of the Kai books: "You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat."Perhaps this should be a footnote in all of the Lone Wolf and Grey Star gamebooks. ~~~ The new Mongoose Publishing editions of the gamebooks clarify that "You may only use one Weapon at a time in combat." ~~~
Added! I am generating the new content now and am upload the relevant updated pages as we speak. (These days I only tend to upload the changed pages rather than the whole book upload, so it's much faster, though it does mean a bit of faffing about.) :-)
>> (er) 1: far to the west of Magnamund -> ? far in the west of >> Magnamund >> [LM] [so: Or, far to the west of Sommerlund?] >> >> My impression is that these mean the same thing. Cf. >> http://www.westofengland.org/> > I can kind of see where LeRoy is coming from in his other post; usually "to > the west of England" would be Wales, whereas "in the west of England" would > mean western England. There are variations, though.OK, agreed, "in the west".
Fixed as: "far to the west" -> "...in the far west..." which is a more correct use of the British idiom.
(er) 177: one set are human prints, but the other set are -> one set >> is human prints, but the other set is [LM] >> >> agreed> > Similar issue. We have a collective noun specifically identified with a > plural, so I think it should be left as is. (As opposed to something like > "one set is deeply embedded into the ground, but the other set is > superficial", where "is" leads into a descriptor rather than an identifier > and would therefore be correct.)I see what you mean. We can reverse this change. Sorry, Simon.
I didn't make the change as I was awaiting further input! :-) Rejected. Assume everything else is fixed/rejected as per the decision presented. -- Simon Osborne Project Aon ~~~~~~ Manage your subscription at http://www.freelists.org/list/projectaon