[projectaon] Re: Errors: Six of the Best (Grey Star #1) [October 9 2008]

  • From: "Jonathan Blake" <blake.jon@xxxxxxxxx>
  • To: projectaon@xxxxxxxxxxxxx
  • Date: Sun, 12 Oct 2008 12:11:20 -0700

On Sun, Oct 12, 2008 at 11:45 AM, Simon Osborne <outspaced@xxxxxxxxxxxx> wrote:

> So all of the following 14 instances of this type should be corrected to
> 'onto' (searched for "self on to "):
>
> 10:152 "...by hurling yourself on to the floor."
> 10:169 "...and drag yourself on to the muddy shore."
> 11:320 "...and pull yourself on to the roof..."
> 12:58 "...enable you to drag yourself on to its deck."
> 12:91 "You pull yourself on to the rail and..."
> 12:194 "...enable you to drag yourself on to the shallow deck."
> 12:309 "He pulls himself on to the deck and comes..."
> 13:103 "...and haul yourself on to the winch platform."
> 13:161 "...you pull yourself on to the platform..."
> 13:288 "...and pull yourself on to the drawbridge..."
> 21:276 "...and pull yourself on to his back."
> 22:261 "As you pull yourself on to the deck..."
> 24:100 "You pull yourself on to the platform and..."
> 27:85 "...you haul yourself on to your mount..."

Those look like they should indeed be fixed.

--
Jon

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